Posts by _TheRedX

Please Note: The TotalFreedom Forum has now been put into a read-only mode. Total Freedom has now closed down and will not be returning in any way, shape or form. It has been a pleasure to lead this community and I wish you all the best for your futures.

    So, I'm back.

    I looked through your post again and saw that there are some more images added, however, that still doesn't solve much. Here's why:

    1. Your builds are too plain.
    I personally think that there has to be quite a bit more for building to apply for Master Builder. You can't just, for example, build a basic dirt hut and call it "a master builder worthy building". It's not how it works. You need to actually invest effort into your builds and not just make something throwaway and call it a day.

    2. The redstone knowledge you say that you have isn't shown here.
    Sure, I can see that you can build something, but I think a LIGHT CIRCUIT is NOT master builder worthy. I'm personally a very good redstoner myself and I have a lot of experience, therefore I think I have quite a lot of say in your redstone abilities. If you're applying for Master Builder, you definitely want to show something big if you're doing redstone. It's important to not think of Master Builder as something special. It's not about the rank - it's about actually doing something good for the server. It's a rank that proves you're qualified for something. It's also somewhat of a responsibility, though not as much as before. Usually MB is just chill now. Master Builder is not something that you should think of an easy task. I had one application fail on me, and for similar issues. My second application however, has lead me to actually getting approved and getting MB. If you want to get MB, you need to actually do something good instead of just thinking people here will accept anything. Also, preferably don't lie that you "forgot". Not saying that you definitely lied here, but it's extremely unprofessional from your point of view. If you want to look professional, you NEED to prepare and make sure that everything is there beforehand.

    3. Your application is very plain and not MB worthy.
    You're not showing enough effort in your app. The way I did it, is I took like a year or something like that off, and just tried to improve over time. You look like you're too excited for your application and just screwing it up in the meantime. You instead, should use this time in improving your builds. Learning more techniques. Grian's builds and following along with him, experimenting, helped me quite a bit with building. I'm mostly a self-learner, so I usually experiment with stuff a lot and only then I learn it. You need to find what you like doing. Just because you "can" do something, like terraforming, doesn't mean it's *definitely* MB worthy. You should definitely get to know yourself more, and learn more stuff over the time. Also, the INSTANT this gets denied, which it probably will as seeing the lack of potential in your app, don't just go ahead and reapply again. Instead, take more time. Really get into something. Or maybe, MB is not something that you really want, and rather just as a rank to make you look "more appealing".

    Overall, I think your app is NOT MB worthy, and even the added photos don't help it. I mean, what are you showing here? A basic light circuit? This is *kinda* redstone knowledge, but, believe me, NOT enough to give you MB. If you're really just trying to push yourself here and just trying to get the rank, you shouldn't apply for MB. If you want to actually learn stuff, just ask other MBs. Redstone? Ask me. I'm available quite often and will probably be able to help you. Also, don't go for something too insane, neither too simple.
    Also, the vote is staying the same, as I can see that you haven't improved anything over those "added photos", and one of the builds I even saw you build right around the time of this MB application. You need to prepare beforehand, not mere hours before or after you apply.

    I wish you luck next time! Peace.
    \~ TheRed

    Hello, so, let me get this straight:

    You're showing like 11 images of one build.

    I think this is not enough to justify you being MB. You need multiple builds, and NOT multiple images.

    Also, I personally think you should write only areas you excel in, and not just all areas that you CAN do. For example, in my app I wrote that I'm good at redstone. In no way do I need for you or want you to go as insane as me and make an entire video just for my MB app, but you should definitely add more builds. It's important that you show proof for all of the areas you excel at, and video evidence is actually preferred and sometimes encouraged.

    Sorry to say this, but for now, it's an Object.

    I would like for you to try harder next time and maybe even get better at these areas in the meantime!

    Anyways, peace.

    Hello

    So I've had this issue where my inventory would get randomly cleaned - turns out, it's something to do with the impostor mode clearing my inventory. tbh this is absolutely stupid and should've never been added, your inventory should be always saved and returned back when you are no longer impostor.

    we need a fix for this, this is a stupid issue and I hope it gets resolved

    thank you

    PS: I've lost multiple kits and items and stuff over this

    I've so far personally haven't noticed you online so far, which would make me go for neutral, BUT seeing the amount of vouches I can see on the application, as well as the fact that your application is pretty well made and solid, I'll go ahead and declare...

    A vouch.

      RedEastWood I am decently fluent, however, if this application gets accepted, I would still need to undergo training because all I really know is when I ask about TFM some admin, who of course, doesn't always respond. I haven't used TFM myself on a server so therefore I'm not the most familiar. I do know how to use plugins that aren't TFM, like coreprotect, worldedit, worldguard, etc...

    Edit: One command that I remember really well is /gtfo lol
    Edit 2: Fixed a grammatical error (made it a bit clearer)

    @'fndndjdnsnsn'
    1st image - That was just a joke, which might've not been understood and it's already months old
    2nd image - I just thought ria didn't see it and she was around the time when I told ppl i made that app before
    3rd image - as I said, our friendship with pixlqp was already falling apart and this is not the first time. I just care about pixlqp and tried to just prevent him from switching, but I do now understand that I was quite restrictive with him.

    Thanks for your vote.

    Edit: please add a little more context before sending something like the 1st image, since it was meant as a joke, but it might've not appeared as one

      erin Hey erin, thanks for this reply.
    I understand your concern and I accept it. These kinds of replies let me improve!
    But to note, I have thought about this conversation, and yes, it was a bit aggressive of me, but our friendship with pixlqp was already falling apart, which caused for this conflict to happen. I'm looking forward to not involve in these situations again going forward, and again, I completely understand your concern!

    Again, thanks erin for the informative reply!

    @'r00t' yeah, that conversation was just hellfire, it was a mess. However, I and pixlqp were already somewhat falling apart because he just has a really dominative personality, which, caused conflict and an eventual ban from Astra.
    I, personally, do not appreciate the way the guy handled this situation, but what happened, happened.

    Thanks for your vote and for pointing this out!