This is our current server description.
After looking at other servers, I think we should simplify this much more. I appreciate the effort put in above, but I think it's tmi.
Some of the servers at the top have short descriptions like this:
QuoteA Minecraft server with new experiences and the latest content in Minecraft. Join our community and make new friends to play with! The server features survival, skyblock, creative, factions, towny earth, and more!
While others have simple bullet points like this:
Welcome to Minecraft in Pokemon!
▶ Blaze Gaming Pixelmon
Pixelmon Reforged : 8.1.2
Minecraft Version : 1.12.2
Modpack : https://modpack.mc-blaze.com
REFORGED: https://www.reforged.gg/
▶ Blaze Gaming - Vanilla
Servers:
Greek OP Skyblock [1.16.3] - $1000 ISTOP Season 6 LIVE! Prison Egypt [1.8-1.16] - $250 CELL TOP Season 1 LIVE! Survival Jurassic [1.16]▶ DISCORD : discord.gg/blaze NEW ! WE NOW HAVE AN EU SERVER IP
▶ EU IP : eu.pixel.mc-blaze.com
▶ NA IP : play.mc-blaze.com
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(Source is Minecraft MP)
I am not saying that if we change it, we'll instantly get more players. I'm just saying it's better to change it as it will be easier for potential players to read.
I've come up with one on my own:
Welcome to true Freedom!
TotalFreedom NetworkFree OP - freedom.play.totalfreedom.meSMP - smp.play.totalfreedom.me We have many plugins including (but not limited to) Carz, more plugins etc
You can join us @ play.totalfreedom.me
You can also talk with us on the following platforms:
Forum -
Discord -
I think the shorter description will be quicker for people to read and pick up the features of our server. Put your thoughts below on what it could be or if we should change it or not.
I also don't really know if this fits into suggestions or general discussion so I'm just plopping it into suggestions for now.
Edit: fixed formatting
Edit 2: fixed formatting again